Can anyone help with me resume


Beboo , Saturday, 31st of July 2010 12:57:54 PM

Objective: To obtain a position with a growing company with the
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/>opportunity to excel and gain more experience in the Customer
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/>Service industry.


Work History:
Joined: Thursday, 20th of May 2010, 04:09:32
/>(5/2007-11/2007)

Temp. Position-Title coordinator
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Samuel Morse Dr
Columbia, MD

Responsibilities include but 
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are not limited to:

-Taking inbound calls and analyzing the 
needs of the customer as well as entering data received during the 
conversation.

-Maintaining client accounts.
/>-Contacting Abstractors to verify legal information

-maintain 
contact with outside vendors to be certain they are responding timely to 
the needs of the title company regarding a given file.

-Update 
clients on the status of existing products

(10/2006-03/2007)/>
Final Title Processor
Resource Real Estate Services
300 
Redbrook Lane
Owing mills, MD

Responsibilities include but 
are not limited to:

- Audit files for compliance, review closing 
documents and prepare
final Owner’s Title Insurance Policies and 
Lender Title Insurance
Policies.

- Transmit all required 
documents to Lender/ Via email , fax or us mail

- Open files in 
Computer System/DMS

-Create and Mail client and customer 
letters

-Obtain lender, seller, buyer, borrower, agent, and 
other
transaction related information as required

-Collect 
and deposit all funds in accordance with the
settlement/HUD-1
/>-Comply with all requirements detailed in the loan closing/>instructions and return lender(s) package

-Reviewing recorded 
mortgage and title binders to ensure recordings are accurate.
/>-Performs title, tax and parcel searches.

-Review all files 
to ensure compliance with all closing instructions

/>(2001-2006)

Campus Safety Officer
Maryland Institute 
College of Art
Baltimore, MD

Responsibilities include but 
are not limited to:

-Greeting customers

-Interacting 
with customers to provide information in response to
inquiries about 
the college or its services and to handle and
resolve complaints 
through a variety of means via by telephone; by
e-mail, fax, or 
regular mail correspondence; or in person.

-Keeping an 
accurate and daily log of crimes, incidents and reported/>activities

-Transmitting messages by radio

-Acting 
as first responder to any emergency situation

-Protecting the 
persons and property of students, faculty, staff and
visitors/>
-Patrolling in electric vehicle and on foot on all campus 
streets,
byways and interior areas

-Monitoring fire 
alarms, theft alarms and closed circuit TV
surveillance systems/>
-Taking inventory of ''lost and found'' property
/>-keeping record using the alphabetical filing system
/>Education:

(1998-2000)

Southwestern Senior High 
School
Baltimore, MD

High School Diploma

(2001- 
2003)

Family Bible Institute, College, Seminary, & School of 
Counseling
Baltimore, MD

Associate of Biblical Studies 
Degree

Certificate of Completion of Creation Therapy Counseling 
Program

Skills:
- Experience in reading title binders and 
reviewing recording
mortgages for final policy

-Strong 
verbal communication and listening skills

-Good interpersonal 
skills

-Able to work independently within specified time 
constraints.

-Basic to intermediate computer knowledge/>
-Possess a friendly and professional manner

- Ability 
to successfully resolve common client /customer problems
in a 
positive, calm, and professional manner.
Technical Skills
/>-Ability to use a variety of office machines.

-Proficient in 
Microsoft Word, Excel, and Outlook

-Ability to apply common 
sense / practical approaches to solving concrete problems
/>References: Available Upon Request
2 days ago - 1 day left to 
answer.
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Gare Bear , Sunday, 1st of August 2010 05:19:28 AM

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lala , Monday, 2nd of August 2010 11:39:14 PM

First place to start is ur Objective - I am not been rude; but  
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HR will view it as it is all about you & what you want - not what you can  
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offer their company & how they get the benefit.  
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Try something along the lines of  
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'To find an entry-level role in an organsiation that values customer  
service as one of, if not the, most important area of operations & where I  
may use my skils to provide the best possible standard of service in  
accordance with company procedures & policies to clients'.  
 
You might like to play with it a bit - but you get the drift.  
 
Also, I would cut the reference to Bible studies - unless you are applying  
to a Christian organisation - it may frighten some places as they will  
think you will spend ur time saving souls.  
 
If you are asked to account for the period of time verbally - tell the  
truth you were  
Studying theology  
Bibilical period history  
This makes you sound as though you are studious - saying you were doing  
Bible studies because mom said or because you are a devote Christian is  
not a good idea - can raise for HR issues relating to discrimination etc -  
particularly if they have had problems before.  
 
 
 
 
 

love bunny , Tuesday, 3rd of August 2010 12:40:53 PM

Your objective is too jargony & useless for one. The  
love bunny
''references available upon request'' is completely unnecessary & you need  
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to put in accomplishments, not duties. In other words, omit  
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''Responsibilities include but not limited to''.  
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I would really need to tinker with this off-site in order to really help  
you. Your sentences go back & forth between present & past tense, there is  
too much jargon & fluff in it, grammar is lacking, too many highlighted  
duties [accomplishments], & you need to consider limiting all of these  
points to short bullet points using no more than 3-4 per section.  
 
Try ''Experience'' over ''Work History ''Qualifications'' over ''Skills''.  
In education, you may want to try:  
 
August 1998 - June 2000 ABC High School, Yourtown, Yourstate  
Diploma  
 
2004 Completion of Certificate of Creation Therapy  
 
Your primary goal is to sum up YOU as simply & quickly as possible. The  
fluff & other nonsense will leave you hitting the trash bin.  
 
If you would like me to work on it & really show you via e-mail, feel free  
to message me for my address.  
 
 
 
 
 

my main sconee . , Wednesday, 4th of August 2010 02:28:11 PM

Just with a quick glance, take out the objective, it is not  
my main sconee .
needed anymore & it is rather blah.  
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Do not put responsibilities include but are not limited to.Just put  
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Responsibilities & bullet point all the things you did, making them one  
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sentence & to the point.  
* Analyzed the needs of customers, answered questions & resolved problems  
 
*Maintained (make sure you stay in the same tense throughout the resume)  
client accounts (you may want to include specifics on how you maintained  
them.  
*Contacted Abstractors to verify legal information  
 
Your school info needs to be switched so that you have ur most recent  
first.  
 
Those are a few things, you should post this on the resume helper on  
Monster.com, they can help you more then I can  
 
 
 
 
 

NeeNee. , Thursday, 5th of August 2010 09:23:59 PM

toughest question to answer ''why did you leave your last  
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position. Resume will get an interview  
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Crash , Friday, 6th of August 2010 02:19:04 PM

It actually looks pretty good. Some spots you used the wrong  
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wording but other then that is seems ok.  
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Jumpy bean , Saturday, 7th of August 2010 01:58:15 PM

Three things  
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1. One this is a place to ask questions you are confused about not a place  
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to be lazy and let other people do your work  
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2. You know yourself better then anyone else so you should be doing your  
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resume  
 
3. What the duece is your question?  
 
 
 
 
 

BunniCakez , Sunday, 8th of August 2010 04:44:54 PM

Why can not you just say as the objective, Customer Service  
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Representative? You should leave the kissing up stuff in your cover  
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letter.  
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McDreamy , Monday, 9th of August 2010 06:57:44 PM

a say orginize all you work history into some sort of timeline  
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SWEET HONEY BOO , Tuesday, 10th of August 2010 01:34:01 AM

This is really the wrong place for this type of thing.  
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You need to be working with a wordprocessor to format everything in an  
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attractive way.  
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Grape juice , Wednesday, 11th of August 2010 05:21:07 PM

no1s gunna read tht  
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sugar britches , Thursday, 12th of August 2010 03:33:45 AM

i wud've buh srry its soooo long, good luck hope you get the  
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job  
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